I need to start this review with something of a caveat – for the most part, I don’t like the work of Haruki Murakami. His works tend to leave me feeling cold, and perhaps more importantly, repetitive. But the amount of hype surrounding 1Q84 was massive – both in Japan and overseas – and so I felt obliged to give it a go. And then it was longlisted for the Man Asian Literary Prize, so I couldn’t back out of it. And in case you don’t want to read the whole review (this is slightly longer than I write for most things I review here), this was pretty much my first thought after finishing this 900 page beast: there’s too many hours of my life I’m never going to get back.
I’ve never completely understood the reason for Murakami’s popularity in the West, or indeed, in Japan. Rebecca Suter, an academic at Sydney Uni, offers an interesting thesis that makes a lot of sense in my head. You’ll have to read the whole thing here, but the thrust is that Murakami manages to blend both Western and Japanese cultural backgrounds into his novels, and this appeals to both sides. For Japanese readers, to Western pop culture references are other-worldly enough to be fascinating, while still being grounded in Japanese sensibility. This is reversed for Western readers, who enjoy the glimpses of an exotic other in his work, while still being comfortable with understandable references.
This is helped, no doubt, by the two translators of 1Q84 – Jay Rubin and Philip Gabriel, both of whom have translated Murakami’s work before. Before we get to the issue of having two translators for one novel (I think it’s a terrible idea), there’s the fact that there seems to be a concerted effort by these translators to make Murakami more palatable to Western tastes – a simple comparison of passages in the Japanese original, and then the English translation, highlight missing words – sometimes sentences – chopped up phrases, and generally weird stuff going on. I’ve always been taught to keep as close to the original text s possible, preserving sentences and words, even if they sound a little funny, but clearly Rubin and Gabriel think differently. If I were a better person, I would have read this in Japanese, but you probably wouldn’t have the translation for a few more months…
This is all, of course, only tangentially related to this novel, but these are the questions I was thinking about as I read 1Q84. And you should all, too. As a widely publicised “magnus opus,” it has become something of a lightning rod for people’s views of Murakami’s work – everything you expect from a “Murakami novel” is here, so if you’re expecting something different, be prepared to be disappointed.
Tengo Kawana has been given an unusual request by his editor – to rework a novella from a young girl called Fuka-Eri, and enter it into the new writers’ prize. He does, but in doing so, is pulled into a world he never knew existed. Meanwhile, Aomame works as an assassin, killing men who perpetrate domestic violence. But when she walks onto a highway exit from a taxi, she too is drawn into a strange world where not quite everything is as she remembers.
Murakami’s characters have fantastical adventures to escape their everyday, humdrum lives. This is, of course, the message he has been sending us right from the beginning – that modern Japanese society is so deeply unfulfilling, so boring, people turn to the magical to fill their days. Tengo is no different to this – his own frustrations as a writer allow him to be more open to the strange request that draws him into the parallel world of 1Q84, a parallel version of the 1984 in which this novel is set.
The world into which Tengo finds himself drawn is a world of strange cults in which supernatural events are an everyday occurrence, where strange creatures are born out of thin air, only to make their own chrysalis to create more people, and where the mother/daughter (maza/dohta in the translation, マザー/ドウタ) relationship is vitally important. Murakami is a frustrated science fiction writer stuck in the wrong literary mode. So many of these ideas would be fantastic, if only Murakami could channel them into a big, bold, proper literary sci-fi novel, and deal with them properly. Instead, they are relegated to quirky post-modern window dressings, in a world of very confused sexual politics.
Which brings me around to Aomame, a character that should be far more engaging than she actually is. I love the idea of a broken woman going on a rampage and carefully assassinating men who beat their wives. There’s an entire novel in that sentence alone. But once Aomame is drawn into the mysterious world of Sakigake (先駆け, or frontrunners, in Japanese) the cult which forms the main focus of the mystery at the centre of 1Q84, she seems to lose that drive, and instead become all consumed with finding Tengo, a boy she went to school with and had a strange, but significant ten second encounter with twenty years ago.
It seems desperately unfair that a big fat horrible man should be allowed to die in a manner of his choosing. In the real world, any middle aged man who has “ambiguous congress” with underage girls is rightly punished, particularly when he says he did it because of some supernatural being. But in Murakami’s world, because these beings are real, it seems somehow more justified. This man is simply doing his job. Which is an uncomfortable thought, to say the least. And for a novel that brings questions of domestic violence, and of poorly treated women, to the fore, I feel like Murakami should be making a better point. There’s also the awkwardly and deeply uncomfortable sex scene between Tengo and Fuka-Eri (which did make it onto the shortlist of this year’s bad sex award). For me, it’s not uncomfortable because it’s badly written, but because Murakami goes out of his way to describe Fuka-Eri as child-like in appearance, and indeed manner, so it reads like Tengo is sleeping with a child. I don’t think I need to explain any further why I found that uncomfortable.
Then, of course, we get to the third section, which feels like an unnecessary addition in so many ways. Written about a year after the first two sections, it introduces a third point of view character, Ushikawa, who in many ways, is completely unnecessary. In other ways, though, he’s quite useful, because he actually has some plot to be getting on with, and his chapters allow you to understand why it is that Tengo and Aomame are being (very poorly) chased by Sakigake.
There are some positives, though. I love the old woman for whom Aomame works – there’s something really cool in the idea of an old woman crusading against domestic violence from the comfort of her upper-class house, getting other people to do her dirty work for her. And some of Murakami’s post-modern tricks work out quite well – there’s a big discussion about Chekov’s gun when Aomame is given a pistol by Tamaru, and the idea that, now it’s been introduced into the story, it must be used. I won’t tell you what happens, but it’s quite cool. Bonus points, too, for making Tamaru a gay zainichi from Sakhalin, filling all of the minority tick boxes. Minus points, though, for making him poorly written, spouting weird dialogue that is comically unnatural and far too self-aware. Saying that he is gay, so naturally he loves interior design, for example.
1Q84 is messy and unwieldy. It’s far too long for its own good, partially because things repeat themselves again and again – perhaps a better editor was needed. But its ideas and politics are messy, too, and while there are some great concepts buried within these 900 pages, Murakami ultimately prefers to obfuscate them with unnecessary post-modern trickery that was old thirty years ago when he repeated it in his earlier novels. I wonder if the title “magnum opus” is being used because it’s so freaking long? Of course, it has everything one expects to find in a Murakami novel, but that’s about it. 1Q84 doesn’t bring anything new or fresh to the table, particularly in the Haruki Murakami canon.

Fay
December 13, 2011
Matt, I was already thinking that since reviews were mixed and time tight until the Man Asian Prize shortlist anouncement, this book could wait until January. If it makes the shortlist, I will try to read it. One of the judges is a senior Indian diplomat now working in Japan, and M. is the most celebrated of the longlist writers. It will be astonishing if he is not shortlisted, but finishing the rest of the longlist will be a stretch without attempting this tome. I have enjoyed Murakami in the past, but this novel sounds iffy. Thanks for taking on this task. My holiday season will be a lot lighter without a self-imposed deadline to read 1Q84 by January 10, and your review helped with that decision.
Matthew Todd
December 13, 2011
I’m hoping for a Christmas miracle, and it not making the shortlist. Like The Stranger’s Child not making the Booker shortlist this year, maybe the judges’ll try to generate some controversy, and not put it through.
karenlee thompson
December 13, 2011
Terrific review. I love the title and, based on a couple of snippets I’d read, thought I might tackle it during the so-called holiday season. However, I have so many books that I am ‘champing at the bit’ to get stuck into, I might leave this one alone.
Matthew Todd
December 13, 2011
I read it in bits – you could do the same?
Lisa Hill
December 13, 2011
I’ve only just started it, Matt, and so I hesitated to read your review but I couldn’t help myself LOL. I’m only reading it for about half an hour a day while I read other things as well, so it could well be past Jan 10 before I finish it.
Interesting what you say about the translation. I think that Please Look After Mom/Mother suffers from its translation too…
Matthew Todd
December 13, 2011
I’m curious as to your initial thoughts. Are you a Murakami fan?
Lisa Hill
December 13, 2011
This is the problem, I’ve never read Murakami, and here I am starting with this doorstopper, which by most accounts is not one of his bests. I’d really rather have read at least one of the three on my TBR first…
Tony
December 13, 2011
I agree with a lot of what you say Matt, but as a Murakami fan, I’m probably coming at it from a slightly different starting point :) I think that it is flawed, but ultimately well worth reading, and worth reading as three novels, separately.
I’m currently compiling my thoughts for a series of posts, but I have already taken a couple of ‘lighter’ looks at ’1Q84′ if you’re interested:
http://tonysreadinglist.blogspot.com/2011/12/1q84-book-one-split-decision.html
http://tonysreadinglist.blogspot.com/2011/12/1q84-book-two-brief-chat-with-mr.html
Matthew Todd
December 13, 2011
Yes, look, this novel has convinced me that Murakami just isn’t for me, and I should probably give it at least another five years before I even begin to think about picking up another of his novels.
I’m curious, though. I’ve heard he’s a much better short story writer than novelist – have you found that?
Tony
December 13, 2011
I prefer his novels, but his short stories are also very good. ‘The Elephant Vanishes’ is probably his best collection, but ‘afterthequake’ is excellent in its own short, weird little way! ‘Blind Willow, Sleeping Woman’ is a mish-mash of various stuff, and it shows a little, but there are some good stories here too. Several of his novels actually started life as short stories, and these are included in the collections.
whisperinggums
December 14, 2011
Oh dear, I don’t know what to think about this. I’m intrigued by your sci-fi comment. I assume you’ve read other non-sci-fi books that have flights of fancy like, say, magical realist books. DO you feel the same about them is there something particular about Murakami that makes you feel this?
I have to say that the length puts me off despite my being a Murakami fan … like Fay I’ll probably decide when I see whether it makes the shortlist.
Matthew Todd
December 14, 2011
I’m not averse to flights of fancy – the parts in Yoshimoto’s The Lake are quite nicely done, and work like Sjon’s From the Mouth of the Whale manage to weave it in quite well.
It just feels to me that Murakami’s ideas are far more sci-fi than magical realism, if that makes any sense at all. They tend to be more pulpy, less symbolic, though more than anything, are not integrated into his work very well. These things are introduced, have no real bearing on the plot, and are never explained.
Mel u
December 18, 2011
I agree with a lot of what you say-in fact I liked the book less than you do-I am very much a Murakami fan and had very high hopes for 1Q84-I found too much weight put on the use of the little people and as I read it it I could not but imagine them all bursting spontaneously into song-I found the religious cult uninteresting and the big romance was one of the weakest parts of the book
Matthew Todd
December 18, 2011
Yeah, the connection between Tengo and Aomame was tenuous at best. Particularly the revelation in the third act, which I found ridiculous.
Good point, too, about the cult – why where they there? Why was it a secret? Who even were they?
Mel u
December 18, 2011
On the cult-who with an IQ above 84 would follow them? on the little people, do they emerge naked? are they female or male and of they are women where is the descriptions of their breasts -
winstonsdad
December 22, 2011
I ve yewt to read this matt but fro your review it sums up my feelings before reading it that it is too long and the transaltion has been rushed out one person should have done it ,I m still not sure if I will read it but if it makes shortlist I ll have too ,all the best stu
Matthew Todd
December 22, 2011
It’s waaaaaaaaaaaay too long.
Re: the translation – I’m not sure it was necessarily rushed – the first two parts were released in May 2009, so there’s been some time. And the third part was at the beginning of last year. But yes, I do think it should have been done by one person.